design progress

From last week's feedback the main problem is about the circulation.
I change it, and put opening of the apartment at the basement floor more closer to the main street, and been bring to the ground floor. The entrance of the gallary had been moved to the basement floor.
The idea of big void box had been further developed, now i have a huge space for the gallary.
But still the circultion is not good enough, it seems too "complex", i should change it.